by Megann Lee Oct 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
If there was one thing I could wish for, it would to be to never have my heart broken. I'd just want to have been happy, knowing it would never have been crushed, and stomped on, like so many times before. What is it that we want when we date someone? Are we really in love? Do we just like the fact we have someone whom will say they love us, and someone who is always there for you when you need them. Honestly, when you date someone do you truly love them? Do you ask yourself that, so you know what your feelings are? Are you so sure about it when you date that you know deep, deep, down inside that he or she is the one - Someone you may spend your life with? As well, what is it with people in the whole age thing?! Seriously I mean give me a break, age doesn't mean shit if you feel for someone more than you have felt and loved anyone ever. It's just a silly number it shouldn't matter, but we all know in some form it does. From my soul point of view, I think age is nothing; it shouldn't matter if two people love each other. I do however think that some people may be too young to understand the true meaning of love. I don't mean it in a rude, or ignorant fashion, cause I know people whom have loved since they where children, and have grown up and lived happily. I am merely stating some people have no idea what the true definition of love actually is. They might have grasped the concept of love, but not the true meaning. It may depend on sole how they where raised around it, and what their parents taught them. If could even be learned by not having people love them, and them learning the hard way. I can't give anything but my point of view on what I have seen with people and love. I am nothing more than an ordinary person, explaining what I see from my point of view. From what myself have seen as well as been through. |
by PygmyPuff
I love how you maintain the poetic values in the story rather than typical stanza form |
by Lovely Bones
"Its love you can't tell someone how to operate it. It's not like a car, or a tractor. It does not come with an instruction manual, or owners guide. Nor does it come with a book called "The Proper Way to Love" sure maybe if there was such thing as proper and perfect love would be easy. No one would get broken hearts or make any mistakes. What would be the point then?" |
Wow. This was really long, but totally worth the time taking to read it. It was so beautifully written, and a great story line for a book of some sort. I really like all the descriptions, and the vocab chosen out. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by BlueDreams
Interesting penned, though long but worth to read...i liked the way how you write them, absolutely beautiful... |
by Tammie
I think this is a really great idea for a book, and i think that you have started it exceptionally well. I don't think i could ever write a book, i'm not too sure, but i admire the fact that you have that talent. You could definately keep expanding on that. I don't think there is anything wrong with it, or any way you could improve it. But i don't write stories/books etc, so i suppose i wouldn't really know. But anyway, just thought i'd let you know that i think it's great, and i would read it if you finished it. =] Great work, Keep it up. 5/5 |