This is a really good poem, i really understand what your going through. I loved this part "you see the shadows under my eyes."you ask me if i'm alright.i nod and try to smile,but it only lasts for a while." i can really relate to that, i know it feels. If you ever want to talk you can email me on kate_rankin92@hotmail.com.

Great work, keep it up.

love kate xo

Wow...I loved this.
I could totally relate to all of it.
Everything about it was good, the flow, imagery, wording.
Well done.
5/5

This poem was absolutely amazing it brought every emotion to me that you can imagine

This poem was absolutely amazing it brought every emotion to me that you can imagine

Gr8 poem!!! I really loved it!!!
It's sad and emotional, well written!!
Keep it up =)
5/5