Comments : The Flame

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Well, honestly I had to read this one a second time to make sure that my assumptions of metaphorical meaning were correct, or atleast made sense. I really liked it though. It was pretty to see the flames like that (I really like flames actually... maybe not such a good thing). It was warm too, like I could imagine the fire warming me up, and I could see someone dancing around it. Then you brought in the deeper kind of warmth, the warmth that only someone else can give you... I really enjoyed that. Thankyou:)