Hush!

by Natalie   Oct 1, 2006


Somber memories erased with hands,
Touching one another in enchantment,
Gracefully reaching into broken hearts,
Sparking fires, revealing every moment.
(Hush now! ....I'm here to rescue you!)

Sunshine rays peering through clouds,
Rainy days disappearing without a trace,
Evaporation choosing the right actions,
Leaving dozens of smiles upon my face.
(Hush now! ....I'm here to rescue you!)

Unknown words creeping towards ears,
Blazing flames with many beats of hearts,
Stealing pain and sorrow away forever,
Promising this is where happiness starts.
(Hush now! ....I've finally rescued you!)

1st October 2006
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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    That's such a nice poem! How you changed the last line was very effective, and the second stanza to me, was really good. With the change from rainy to sunny, i'm not sure, i just like that alot. Sorry, not a very good comment. Well written! =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great one by you

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing Hun. I really loved this one. I thought the second stanza was wonderful, and it stood out the most to me.:]

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    No wonder this poem has been rated so high neeki. It's beautifull and the last line brings the whole piece together.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm.. sooo did you write this one for Jay? hehehe just teasing!!! That's what brothers are for right!?..

    Well, this is really good! I wasn't sure if your new style would work on love poetry, but it indeed did. The rhymes were great and your imagery was super! Lol, that's the SMAWCE way ;)

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