Oh my, those lovely penned... marvelloues poem you potray here, flowed well with beautiful emotions.... simply beautiful ended,...

wish you have a great weekend, best wishes from west... bert ~

O.o this was soooo good! I'm jealous coz I can't write good like you :( lol

Wow.
I loved this it was..Wow.
I loved your choice of words! & How at the end you changed the last sentence. Brought the idea together.
So cute && Amazing.
Good work!

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Great Poem, i love the way you have that one repetive line the whole way through, youve manage to create all these wirling images inside my head, which not many poems can!
well DOne 5/5
Love Mel

Ooo...creative. ^_^ I really liked how you repeated the [(Hush now! ....I'm here to rescue you!)] lines, and then put that you have finally rescued him. (I was assuming it was a guy) I liked the beautifully written stanzas, with great description of almost everything. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow this is beautiful. i really like this a lot. you had a lot of description in the poem. great job. 5/5

Aww, wow what a beautiful poem. The ending was absolutely spectacular, you have such a wonderful way with words. I read this about three times because I had to capture the full beauty. Excellent work as always Nat, I don't think I'll ever stop loving your poetry. Keep it up! 5/5

Great poem. While i read it, it felt like it was meant to read in a whisper.

"creeping towards ears," I think you should get rid of the s after Towards

Awh, that was soo sweet hunny! I loved the parenthesis after each stanza, they really added a nice effect.. The flow was good and your descriptions full of amazing imagery as usual.. Loved it, love you! =P Keep it up! 5/5

Hmm.. sooo did you write this one for Jay? hehehe just teasing!!! That's what brothers are for right!?..

Well, this is really good! I wasn't sure if your new style would work on love poetry, but it indeed did. The rhymes were great and your imagery was super! Lol, that's the SMAWCE way ;)

No wonder this poem has been rated so high neeki. It's beautifull and the last line brings the whole piece together.

Amazing Hun. I really loved this one. I thought the second stanza was wonderful, and it stood out the most to me.:]

Another great one by you

That's such a nice poem! How you changed the last line was very effective, and the second stanza to me, was really good. With the change from rainy to sunny, i'm not sure, i just like that alot. Sorry, not a very good comment. Well written! =] 5/5

Tammie xo