Awsome poem....well said...i don't know what eles to say...this poem is so fliping amazing...each word goes so well with the next word...GREAT job!!!
auna

God = God

What in the world have you been doing then? These are well written. You're not even using ellipsis' or making any mistakes with your words. The last two poems I've read have been that way. But the first three were almost horrid with all the mistakes and such.

Maybe you need to re-read and edit the newer ones you write a bit more. Because these here are much better than the newer ones.