Deana dear, i've nothing to comment with this poem, absolutely beautiful penned, perfect written! simply beautiful done!

Well, reading the poem, reading the comments, I seem to dissagree with some of the comments. I adore the piece, but I guess sometimes as a reader we choose to read what we will in a piece. For me this is simple, it's elegant. I don't find in it many metaphors, just reflection. Writing is for everyone different things I guess. Sometimes it's just a red wheelbarrow. Kudos

Love ure rhymes
love your words
love your morale in the story
everything was awesome
Great job
really
5/5
~MF~

5/5 your sensational :) I wanted to use that word and it was a good time to use it :D