Perfect Enough For You?

I thought this was really sad...
I liked the imagery and wording you used in this, it was really hard hitting.
Another wonderful write.

Again, I'm reading a poem with more pain than I like to see in any one; and yet I know it's a really common thing, one which is easy to relate to. That's definatley a good thing for your readers when they can become a part of your writing - you seem to be really good at that especially. I hope all is well with you though. I know writing sometimes speaks more truths than anything else about someone, so if you ever need someone to talk to, you know you've got a good community of writers here.
And if this is purely just thought, and writing on paper, than you're really really good! lol. Keep it up.

The poem was great. Just remember, God made everone in His image. He made everyone the way they are for a reason. he loves you and you are special to a lot of people

This was a nice poem! so sad... and wow... has all the sad emotions in it... donno what to say 5/5

Thank you for downvoting all my poems ! NOT!