Comments : Perfect Enough For You?

  • 18 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Great poem, with a good flow in it.. and please, stay strong..

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    An excellent written poem, the flow and rhthym was really good.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw.. that is so sad. I loved it so much. My favorite stanza was:
    Twisted images of beauty
    Dance Inside my head
    While looking In the mirror
    Wishing I was dead
    That was very good. I loved it. And I also really like the way that you ended it. It's so true for so many people and you did a great job on capturing that. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really sad, & I hope it's not based on you.

    You used good wording to give the poem a little more strength, & your flow was nice too, as with the rhyming. The ending was my favorite. I thought you wrote that perfectly. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Thank you for downvoting all my poems ! NOT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was a nice poem! so sad... and wow... has all the sad emotions in it... donno what to say 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tawny

    The poem was great. Just remember, God made everone in His image. He made everyone the way they are for a reason. he loves you and you are special to a lot of people

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Again, I'm reading a poem with more pain than I like to see in any one; and yet I know it's a really common thing, one which is easy to relate to. That's definatley a good thing for your readers when they can become a part of your writing - you seem to be really good at that especially. I hope all is well with you though. I know writing sometimes speaks more truths than anything else about someone, so if you ever need someone to talk to, you know you've got a good community of writers here.
    And if this is purely just thought, and writing on paper, than you're really really good! lol. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was really sad...
    I liked the imagery and wording you used in this, it was really hard hitting.
    Another wonderful write.