Cupid's Lies

by Bryan   Oct 1, 2006




I'm tired of hearing Cupid's lies,
bringing nothing but tears from my eyes.
Tired of all his tricks he likes to play,
like what he told me that dreadful day.
Told me I loved her more than life,
told me to ask her to be my wife.
But it all came crashing down,
and now I lay here on this cursed ground.
Wondering if this pain will end,
pain when you said we are only friends.
Cupid's lies have finally got to me,
finally made me find what I didn't want to see.
That no matter what my feelings are for you,
you will never feel the same way too.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Wow that was really powerful and emotional. i love it it rocks! and its really really good! keep up the good work!:)

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Wow that was really powerful and emotional. i love it it rocks! and its really really good! keep up the good work!:)

  • 17 years ago

    by danielle

    Omg i love this poem its sad but really good good job on the flow keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I want the flow,, love it! just continue writing all what u feel and i keep on reading hehe.. well honestly i love the way how u write a poem.. seems u have a great imagery and very talented person,,lines are very clear and i think the rhyme was good too.. keep it upt 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan,
    This is a very sad poem. The feelings of a broken heart are such strong enotions. I love your title. Great job! Take Care Cindy

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