This was really sad. :( I liked it though. At times it seemed it could maybe flow a little better, but overall it was a very enjoyable read. Just one little mistake:

"Told me I loved her more that life,"

I think you meant 'than' instead of 'that'.

Good job.

This is such a sad, but wonderfully written poem. I really liked the title.. I thought that it was very catchy and definitely made me want to read it. The rhyming on this was very well done & the flow was very good also. I really enjoyed reading this! Great job! 5/5

The poem is beautiful, bryan. so sad, but you did a great job. captured the mood real well. 5/5

Bryan,
This is a very sad poem. The feelings of a broken heart are such strong enotions. I love your title. Great job! Take Care Cindy

I want the flow,, love it! just continue writing all what u feel and i keep on reading hehe.. well honestly i love the way how u write a poem.. seems u have a great imagery and very talented person,,lines are very clear and i think the rhyme was good too.. keep it upt 5/5

Omg i love this poem its sad but really good good job on the flow keep up the good work 5/5

Wow that was really powerful and emotional. i love it it rocks! and its really really good! keep up the good work!:)

Wow that was really powerful and emotional. i love it it rocks! and its really really good! keep up the good work!:)