by ~*Lips_Of_An_Angel*~ Oct 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her hair is up, |
by Corruption
This is awesome i love the idea behind the poem and i think u did a very good job in explaining this matter so good job i loved and thx for ur comment:D |
by blueknight
I like how the story goes and the message you are trying to put across and the rhythm of the poem was also great |
This poem feels very real to me. Although it doesn't flow as well as some other poems, I feel that it is better that way. Good job. |
by Bryan
I like how u did this poem! 5/5!!! |