I like how u did this poem! 5/5!!!

This poem feels very real to me. Although it doesn't flow as well as some other poems, I feel that it is better that way. Good job.

I like how the story goes and the message you are trying to put across and the rhythm of the poem was also great

geneross

This is awesome i love the idea behind the poem and i think u did a very good job in explaining this matter so good job i loved and thx for ur comment:D

keenan