That was beautiful. This is a very interesting style, and I have to admit it's not one of my favourites, but you handled it well. Always capitalize your 'I's. =]

I really really like this. I thought that it was very good and you did an amazing job describing your love for her.. it was a very creative way to describe it, which made the poem even better. I think that you did an amazing job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Oh! wow, this was beautiful. The style was definately that of something I've never seen before, but it definately made the poem that much more interesting. It was wonderfully worded, and an another brilliant poem. 5/5

I loved the poem. structure words the whole shibang.

keep it up.

I love this! you're realy talented! i love it!

Narc xxx