*nice poem*

Wow! Bryan, that was great! I don't usually get this style, but this one was very well written! Thanks for the comment! =]

~Ciao xx

I really enjoy poems of this structure. Some people find it hard to pull off a well-flowing poem that actually makes sense, but you definitely managed to do that. I really liked it. 5/5.

I like this poem.. I think that the story behind it is really sweet and sad at the same time. You did an amazing job on the structure.. it seems very hard to do. The flow and rhythm of this was very good and held up well.. I also liked the repetition of "please" at the end of each stanza or whatever they're called. It helped add to the sadness of the poem and made it a very good read! Great job on this! 5/5

This was amazing. It flowed beautifully and was just right on. I also enjoyed the repetition of the word 'please,' and am very surprised at how much detail i got from this poem considering it wasn't very long. great job! 5/5

Wow a big time 5/5 your really amazing at writing!!! keep it up and im gonna keep reading and voting/commentin

Beautiful poem. i can just picture two ppl twirling under the moodlight.

Part of writing is experimenting with some new styles... I think you pulled this style off ;)
Very nice,

- natasha