Comments : Circular Breathing

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very interesting. an unusual write but i liked it. Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Aw... i liked this. good rhyming, but more than that, cool ideas! "..that tipped the water fromt he moon..." i don't know if i remember that phrase exactly, but i liked it. and for some reason, the "courageous love" of the honey bee seemed to be the perfect phrase to use. good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Beautiful imagery, another amazing work. 5/5

    -Luna-