Comments : Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is a really good poem. I can relate. I hope to read more by you soon ;)

    i love the line -
    'So many times,
    Have I tried to say good bye,
    But I don't want to give up,
    I don't want to cry.'

    It's really sad and honest.

    {{if you like, please check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}}

    ~Scarlett

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabrina

    Thank you... that is how I feel at the moment and it\'s really frustrating :(

    Sure I\'ll check out some of your poems too :)

    Thanks for commenting!!!

  • Hey well done. great poem, excellent rhyming!
    Love mel