One Word before you go

by Just Wishes   Oct 1, 2006


One word before you go.
One thing and then you are free to leave.
I wanna ask you a question
Though I don expect the answer in complete.
Why today you're saying goodbye.
Why do you want to lock our door when it's open wide?
What made you choose such a bitter end,
To a story recently was written.
Was it me?
Or the blame lies on days.
Come here! Tell me the truth..
For you owe me this.
Neither a hug nor a kiss.
I want you just to explain,
How come today my heart you want to break.
What's the price?
Say it twice and trice.
I can't buy it and it's hard to take it.
That tomorrow you won't be there.
That I can stand still as a mountain when you are saying goodbye is OK.
If it wasn't my self-pride I would have cried.
Till my eyes get blind.
As blind as my poor heart.
For I doubt it will see again after we part.

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  • 16 years ago

    by rachelle

    I like this poem. i felt the intensity of it all. great job. 5/5 from me :)

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Hey wishy, its been so long u havnt posted anything new, was wondering if u still on site.
    Will love to see your work again.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Dear Wishy,

    Thanks a ton for posting a poem ,good to see u back .

    U know many of us arnt poet (the technical way),but i belive whoever can pen there feelings honestly is a true poet within .Your poems are wonferful coz u speak ur mind n heart.

    "One Word before you go" is heartfelt poem.i especially like this lines ;
    "If it wasn't my self-pride I would have cried.
    Till my eyes get blind.
    As blind as my poor heart."

    Keep writing

    Love
    chavii.

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