Comments : One Word before you go

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Dear Wishy,

    Thanks a ton for posting a poem ,good to see u back .

    U know many of us arnt poet (the technical way),but i belive whoever can pen there feelings honestly is a true poet within .Your poems are wonferful coz u speak ur mind n heart.

    "One Word before you go" is heartfelt poem.i especially like this lines ;
    "If it wasn't my self-pride I would have cried.
    Till my eyes get blind.
    As blind as my poor heart."

    Keep writing

    Love
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Hey wishy, its been so long u havnt posted anything new, was wondering if u still on site.
    Will love to see your work again.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by rachelle

    I like this poem. i felt the intensity of it all. great job. 5/5 from me :)