This is really good. You can totally sense how confused, sad, shamed, etc. the narrator is. I like that you waited until the end to explain why you were feeling that way. It added a little something suprise.

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~Scarlett

This is a very pretty poem, and considering it's kinda short, it has quite a bit of emotion in it =) Great job

x.xBrokenx.x

Great write, I could really ralte to your penned words.

Rawr! I loved this!! So much emotion put into it...I don't know what to say...this was great!!! 5/5

[[ Poetess ]]

Well i can relate to this :(.. very emotional write, was done beautifully, keep up the magnificent work :)

~[AnotherDream]~