The end

by xXxAngelEyes007xXx   Oct 1, 2006


She was a true friend
together until the end
when she lied
i cried
she made me do
what i never again wanted to
she made me cut
put me in a rut
i was back stabbed
and so i jabbed
the knife in deep
so the blood would seep
through and through
but who really knew
my best friend
true until the end
would date him
making life dim
the lie
making me want to die
saying she broke up with him
that her life dim
in the end he is her boyfriend
so my friend
tis the end
so say goodbye
as i die

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  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Wat a gr8 write hun got my 5 vote
    keep writing and take care sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice. Full of emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by katrina porter

    Wow such a good poem. I can see your anger and your pain in this poem and i can see why you would cut
    I have never cut and hope that i never will cut in my life

    XOJennaOX

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is really good. shanik

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    Wow. This rocks. It reads like a story, I don't know how to describe it. Sucky situation, though, if it's real-ish.

    {{if you like, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}}

    ~Scarlett

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