I really appreciate this, even though none of the proper nouns is known to me.....good work...

I like this poem...so I'm going to give it a 5/5....i really like the figure of speech and the way you compared the person to things...it was really impressive..^^

Hey Ed, there is something about your writing that i just love so much about. I somehow am able to relate and know what your meaning is, and i love that.

These words show true intelligence on the part of the one who penned them. You did an EXCELLENT job with this. You have a very unique way of writing and it truly is beautiful. You are a very talented poet. Please keep writing.
~Midnight Sun