Woah.. That is truely amazingly written. I have a tear in my eye. That is so sad! Very good story you told there, with such a great concept put together very well. Excellent write. Keep it up! =] 5/5

OMG that was so great. I would die like that for my baby. I would never want to be apart from him. That was a really great poem keep it up

Thanks for the comment!!!!:)ya it made me cry just a bit..