by Poetvoices Oct 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Eyes meet once. |
by Jacob
Hey I thought it was good but it lost its point here and there so figured I should tell u |
by Alicia
That was really nice. 5/5 |
Awww, that was so pretty! it really created good images in my head, i LOVED the rhyme scheme, very cool, and the word choice was awesome! |