Souls

It is interesting, very unique and it has great imagery. Rhythm of this poem is excellent, it truly isn't your best work but it is good.

It was totally different but not ur best

Wow..that was deep...it was really good though. Comemnt back.
5/5

Lvoe how u repeated the line: souls of the dead made it more powerfful and real for the reader./.nie imagery...

think it would've been more powerful tf you hadnt mentionsd the word souls in the poem since its the title but yeah..good jobb.

lissa

Wow!!deep stuff!!great job!!the ending was great!! and it flowed perfectly it was...flawless!!keep writing hun!!
~Rachel~