WOW...my favourite so far.

Aw.. this is such a sad and heartfelt poem. You did such a great job on this! The last stanza was my favorite. It really brought the whole poem together and gave it a nice, sad ending. But you did a great job on this. I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

Overall it was pretty good. your rythm could flow a little bit better, but it was good 5/5

I love the last stanza. Again, i can relate and i can feel the emotion in this write. Sorry these are such pointless comments, but i thought i'd write anyway. Great work. =] 5/5