Everyone Watches As I Fall

by Kristina   Oct 2, 2006


I'm so sick of it all,
Everyone just watches as I fall,
I tried to forget everything,
But it wont go away.

It follows me everywhere I go,
The pain inside of me.
I wish it would just let me go,
And let me be free.

It's making me hate,
Everyone around me.
Making me use the knife,
Just to watch myself bleed.

Copyright © September 24, 2005 - Kristina M
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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I can feel the emotion throughout this one. Well written, with a good flow. I like the ending, i think its really good. Great work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Nice poem still 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Sad poem, I can feel the emotions on this one.
    and what great with this poem is that many out there can relate to this one.
    5/5
    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    I would work on this stanza...

    It follows me everywhere I go,
    The pain inside of me.
    I wish it would just let me go,
    And let me be free.

    Go and Go confusing me, like 2 words one right after the other just makes the flow a bit harder.All in all I think you are a good writer though

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is short, but holds so much pure emotion through it. I really like the first stanza. It was seemed to have much animosity and yet sadness. You did such a great job on this poem. I can definitely relate to this in so many ways. The flow and emotions in this poem was really good and this was very well written! 5/5 Keep it up!

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