Well, honestly, I'm not sure what I think about the 'hah' at the ending stanza; it adds alot of character and, almost resentment into the way you feel, and this resentment takes away from the depression it should be showing. But then you bring it back when mentioning that living is overrated... I think I like it actually... It's not something I would typically expect, and that refreshing bit of character is kind of nice to see for a change. Great job!

So sad
so depressing
trul a work of art