by Me&You (simply magical) Oct 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
His lies wrap around her heart |
by Lisa
Great work truly |
by Ike Dizzle
Aww lol simply too late. It sucks when women are mistreated by guys then don't want to give a nice guy a chance. Hopefully you'll find someone who will never be too late. 5/5 |
I love this girl every one lol |
I really like this poem. There are times in life when some of us change or the best. Yes we don't stay where we do not belong. I have written one like this. keep up the great job! |
by Purple
Great job. The lines were long, and because I already have a tiny bit of a head ache that caused me a tiny bit of a problem. Besides that, and a bump in the second to last stanza where the double use of again once again tripped me up a little, you did a practicly flawless job. |