I am really shocked to see this one being not voted so far....i just loved it...great write indeed and dont you think of stopping...releasing your thoughts thru poetry

all the best and take care
5/5

A very sad write...a little confusing, but overall very well written. Jpoet*

Hey Sweeti,

This is a great poem...a lot of feeling and thought has gone into it!

It's a 5/5 from me!

Keep it up and thanks for the comment on my poem...I apprectiate it!

Love

Lysette x x x

Fantastic poem, seriously. I couldn't agree more. Good job! :P

Wow dang girl you so deep and ur only 12 years old!! wow i wish i could have been writing like this when I was this young i read some of ur other poems and wow you got talent as u get older life gets harder and imagine how deep you will be then!! dang girl keep up the good work!!!
5/5!!