Comments : A Night In Paradise

  • 18 years ago

    by p4y5c0

    Wow thats a really nice poem keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by NeSSiiE

    Hey that was actually good for your 1 erotic poem good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by NeSSiiE

    I forgot to add go check out some of mine!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Good for yher first onee (: Better than mine haha

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by Ele

    Thats great, cant believe its your first erotic poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Vampyric Princess

    Wow, awesome poem! for a first time your good lol