Awwhh, wow! Sweetie that was beautiful! I loved it, wow.. No, I adored it! =P It was so powerful and the imagery was amazing.. Wonderful job, truly great poem! 5/5

Way to go with that crazy style! it looks difficult...

thanks so much for your comment, you're a doll

Jenna.. you are a fantastic writer... and any one to tell you other wise is wrong.. you can deff make it girl