Eternity

by Mia   Oct 2, 2006


I look in the mirror,
And don't like what i see,
I'm someone i'm not ment to be,
Tears are falling from my eyes,
I haven't eaten in days,
My hair is a mess but who cares,
I don't feel a thing,
Not even the knife on my skin,
It's like my life support is draining,
Like nothing is worth it anymore,
I would be crying but all the tears have been shed,
There's nothing left,
The spark of life in my eyes,
Has vanished,
Like it was never there in the first place,
All those that love me,
Left long ago,
Packed their bags and never looked back,
So i shut the door,
Sunk to my knee's,
And there i sit,
For all eternity.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    I like this but you said
    "Tears are falling from my eyes,"
    then you said
    "I would be crying but all the tears have been shed,
    There's nothing left,"

    that doesnt make sense there. first you are crying and now you cant?

    and
    "Backed their bags and never looked back,"
    i think its supposed to be "Packed"

    but this is a great poem. and you did a wonderful job writting it. i can relate to it very much =] 5/5

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