I like this but you said
"Tears are falling from my eyes,"
then you said
"I would be crying but all the tears have been shed,
There's nothing left,"

that doesnt make sense there. first you are crying and now you cant?

and
"Backed their bags and never looked back,"
i think its supposed to be "Packed"

but this is a great poem. and you did a wonderful job writting it. i can relate to it very much =] 5/5