Awww this is really really sad, but i can relate to it. its such a great poem. i really like it but i think you should put it in stanza's and it would be better =] 5/5

Hey thanks 4 the comments and i normly do have them in stanza but i put my poems in at school so i dont have enought time do do a bunch of stuff with them

Damn girl this is deep. This is a great poem!!!!!!!

Love it Jay... 5/5