Aww that's sad.. A very well written poem though, the rhythmn and flow was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

Aww this is sooo sad, but i can relate to it. very well written poem you have here. you did a great job. keep it up 5/5

Excellent poem.a lot of meaning behind it.im going to have my friend read it because he is feeling exactly the same thing as you right now.i rate it a 5!

Awh, wow.. I loved that sweetie! It flowed so well and it was real.. I found it very refreshing and the truth in it made it a pleasure to read.. Keep up the wonderful work hunny! 5/5

But each held the same meaning,
I am nothing but alone
((Whoa...that gave me chills))

I loved this poem. You are an excellent writer. You take cliche topics and write about them in (Un-cliche?) ways...Amazing job..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very clean, clear job. I feel like that sometimes. At times I feel cold and numb to pain until tears form. Keep it up

You could add more descriptions...imagery

This was really sad!

i loved the part:

"With every fallen tear
A different story was told
But each held the same meaning,
I am nothing but alone "

Keep it up!

'I am nothing but alone'

Wow wahy an amazing end! Brilliant write so sad and helpless. Loved it
5/5

Kelly
xx

WOW, u got talent. u can make people feel. i like the ending. keep writing5/5:)

Very deep and i really like it alot! your a talented poet

Powerful poeming 5/5,
Pls commonet on mine
thanks

Thats awesome! Im adding you to my favorites!

I enjoyed this poem i relate with it keep writing bridget

That's so sweet i love it. can u plz comment on sum of mine? plz? if u hav time 2.

5/5 ~~Great Poem~~ I loved it! It showed the emotion!

K33P UP TH3 GR3AT WORK!!

I really liked your poem, it really expressed how u feel very well, i can relate to your poem and i think u did an awesome job

Thanks 4 your coment sweety i thought id read your poems and they r really good i like this 1 though as sometimes like now i can realate to it love terrieleigh xx