Comments : Come Dance with the Night

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely done Luanne! You have such talent, no matter the subject. Beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I loved this poem :) A very nice write on a usually cliched topic but you did if superbly!!!!! Great job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I loved this poem :) A very nice write on a usually cliched topic but you did if superbly!!!!! Great job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Luanne!
    You keep producing these wonderful pieces of work, I really enjoy reading special event poems, I think they are so..well.. special! This is descriptive and enchanting, It is great to see how other peoples halloweens are!
    Well done my friend!
    katie!
    xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh I just loved it so much!! The imagery was so vivid I felt like I should be going trick or treatig tonight.
    It made me think of Halloweens of the past and how much fun I used to have when I would go house to house...amazing write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Very good. Nice Halloween poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is fantastic, Luanne... Perfect descriptions of Halloween, love the rhymes and the flow was flawless...

    "streets cover over with a pea soup fog
    as a princess kisses a croaking frog"
    ^^^ These were my favorite lines, so cute!

  • 18 years ago

    by Reborn Rival

    Great description!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I know it's christmas but after reading this, i just want halloween for one night now.
    I blame you and your talent Luanne! How could you =P
    I'm kidding, you're too lovely for me to blame.
    I'll blame the year for flying by too fast, i can't believe 2006 is gone already O_O
    A merry christmas to you to Lu!
    *Gem* xx