Hey. I really like this. It's got a great range of imagery, and life, and even some feeling. You're smile made it for me actually. lol that's not a pick up line of any sort, as I didn't literally mean your smile ha ha, I just like that it added character to scenery. It was really nice.
The only thing I want to warn you of, is nothing important really, as we both know spelling and grammar does not change the meaning, but just incase you are a nit picker as I am, I thought I'd let you know. Near the end line of your poem, it says:

''I breath deeply''
when it should be
"I breathE deeply"

I used to always get them confused between which one is like 'breath of fresh air.' and which is 'breathe in deeply'... But I've got it down now and notice it wherever I go.
So anyway, in conclusion...Great write! :)

Beautiful work.
I could almost see the sun shining on the water, you've really outdone yourself with the imagery on this piece
Brilliant poem
5/5
*Gem*

Nice but uhhh.... whats with the weasel? next time i see you i will bring that up lol... btw great imagery but you should add reference to me, that would make it better lol.

Later,
-AJ