Comments : Trick or Treat

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awe, I think I'm up against you on this challenge too. It's gonna be a tough one lol. Good job on the poem though, it made me smile lol. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Lets kick ass!
    Wonderful write Bill, I really loved it, I liked the bit about the george bush masks! That made me smile, a wonderful write about halloween, EOP have no chance!
    Brilliant writing, :)
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Bill this was a clever and very creative write!!! Very original and a very enjoyable read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Trick or treat ........smell my feet........gimme something good to eat .....lol...what is a day without a little humor .....LMAO

    Wow Bill what a Halloween trip ....
    A very creative poem indeed .
    I think EOP has some definate competition this round .
    Whooohooo CC&P ROCKS !

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Teehee this made me laugh :o)
    I enjoyed reading it and the rhyme was greeeat too which made it easy to read yet showed humer[or however ya spell it].

    Well done. Myup [:

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Hah! Another wonderful write from CC&P, I was flattered by your comment, but even more flattered everytime I stumble upon new poems of our side. There honestly can't be competition with people like you Bill. Keep writing! Your work is such an inspiration.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh Bill, this is great! Witty and funny...

    "Tonight you should lock it up tight
    Be careful with that special candy
    Something does not feel right
    The houses are melting, just dandy"
    ^^^ Ha ha, this stanza really cracked me up... Awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Aww so cute i love it graet job pal