A Never-Lasting Love

by Bridgette   Oct 2, 2006


Desolate hearts intertwined as one
Crushed by the infidelity of another
Broken roads that don't lead home
Walking these dampened streets alone

Sunny skies are a thing of the past
Days are now haunted by blackened clouds
Torrents of tears rain from bloodshot eyes
As one love is replaced by another

Memories of love burning up into flames
Each ash representing a broken promise
Every flame killing any ounce of hope
Until there is nothing or no one left

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sorry, it like cut of my post thingy. Whoops anyway! Well, as I was saying I loved the first stanza, especially the first line. You have amazing talent as a writer. Great flow, wording, great everything. Keep it up! 5/5

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Speechless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Amazing! sadly this is all true. u can capter the emotions of love. everone can relate to this. i lov it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by james meadows

    I like your poems r great keep writin

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Good job on this one. Very sad.

    Desolate hearts intertwined as one
    Crushed by the infidelity of another
    Broken roads that don't lead home
    Walking these dampened streets alone

    Loved this stanza. Flowed well. Keep it up.

    Peace and Happiness
    Jeannie

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