by TheRevelation Oct 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Tears of black cascade down my face, |
by Stephanie
I love this poem, because it's very true in real like. It's really hard to let go of your first true love and some people find it harder than others. Great poem! 5/5 Keep it up! |
Awww! Such a sad but sweet poem. I loved your word usage. Excellent rhyming and flow. Keep it up |
WOW;; REALLY GOOD JOB, AND YES! i AM iN HEAD OVER HEELS LOVE BABY! WOO! LOL, i LOVE HiM SOOOO MUCH! HE`S REALLY PERFECT! && THANKS FOR THE COMMENT! |
Wow I love the way you explained how you loved that guy. It was beautiful. Good Work |