Revenge is Ever Sweet

by Sondos   Oct 2, 2006


Burn me into radiance to fuel my youth
I shall wilt into this fire
And none shall know the point where smoke
Could rise a little higher

Extinguish my passion and escape with me
Where I'll paste and weep you up inside
To the masquerade dance of a cigarette butt
Behind the temptress' flames I hide

And do you hear the rustle of leaves
For revenge is ever sweet
My spear is sharpened at both ends
In seek of fresher meat...

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    OMG Sondos!! Your skill is nothing short of sheer genius. Have you ever tried to get your work publsihed? Please do, lest humanity never gets a chance to read such work.

    This is remarkable. Absolutely breathtaking.

    peace and lotsa love
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ brokendolly ♥

    It's very unique and beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This is on the edge of dark, which I like. wonderful imagery. Kept me reading. hated to see it end.

    Great job

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very nicely written, I like the details you put in here,
    Flow is great also.
    a definite 5!

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    That was very well written. But, the first stanza was a little rocky with flow. Two of the lines were bigger than the others. But, overall, I really enjoyed reading this, it was beautiful. I loved the imagery you used. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

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