My Fantasy

by Josh   Oct 2, 2006


When thoughts of giving up, came into my head
you showed me what id miss, and many a quotes i read

they told me things that i believed, never to be real
that not all hope was lost, in this whole ordeal

my chances were high in your eyes
although they were concealed

but now that we are together
my fantasy is revealed

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  • 18 years ago

    by CiCi91

    Hi,

    I really love this poem. Its really good. try to write more poems,plz.(im not telling u wat to do or anything, but i can see u have talent) so keep it up Josh!!

    -Carrie-

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Ha i found you!!! sorry i was trying to find you but i couldnt!! well hey its really good!!! Love You~Danielle

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