The ticket to my heart

by tiffany   Oct 2, 2006


The Ticket To My Heart
these thoughts of you wont leave my mind
i wonder if this is my sign
"I'm fine"
is what i always reply to you when you ask, "how are you"
i just dint know if what im feeling is true
you were my first at alot of things
but there will always be my cuttings
you took it to the very last limit
still at times i cant help but visit
i come to you like a magnit
all this is because you stole the ticket
to my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked the imagery you used in this, the whole ticket to the heart thing. It was nicely done with a good flow to the words.

    "magnit" = "Magnet"

    =) 5/5
    *Gem*

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