Wow hun that was really really beautiful. I really wish I could write lyrics but it just doesn't seem to be happenein for me. Obviously your a natural at it. That was really great. I'm sorry I havn't commented in a while...I missed your poetry(and lyrics) lol.
5.5 on this it was so beautiful...and sad...
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I like this lyric... great work :)

Hey great poem and im not mad at u not at all..........ok but u should of told cuz i had a crush on u!! lol well ttyl okies byers

You got some wicked lines here yourself. Thanks for the comments. So you're a filmmaker, eh? Too bad I didn't know about that contest thing earlier.