Another dark poem...well written... you've got alot of talent
auna

I think the peom is great, You do have a talent for writing dark stuff! I Really need to get better at that, I love to write it gets rid of a lot of built of anger, but I cant seem to get the whole rhyme thing down. lol anyways awesome

I love walt whitman!!!!!! and lord byron is pretty good too if you are looking for something to read