Comments : WHY?

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hmm...I feel like Im the one asking the questions.
    Just remember that

    "Nobody gets to live life backward. Look ahead, that is where your future lies"

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by one of my favorite poet. again you proved that ur the best

  • Hey, well done! i don't think anyone but yourself can answer those questions. good luck and love
    ~She Died Screaming

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    In the first stanza i think it should be "Why do I..." i think "do" sounds better with it.

    second should be "Why Am I..."

    third "Why can't I..."

    fourth "Why is it..."

    if you changed all that it would flow a lot better. but it's a great poem! keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Thanks for the nice compliment jess and shatterd i really appreciate it i know

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Thanks for the nice compliment jess and shatterd i really appreciate it i know

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Thanks for the nice compliment jess and shatterd i really appreciate it i know

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    I Love those question and those words you put here in this poem I can relate to this by the words you use this is a great work keep it up

    kababayan
    Geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice... So many questions... Have you found the answers?

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Very deep, I like it... Keep up the good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I agree with Jess about this poem. I like the poem, it has a nice flow. But it's kind of rocky . I think that you should go over it and do some editing and I think that then it would be a excellent poem. 4/5
    Keep up the good work.

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Very good poem. It's so heartfilling, yet so sad. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Ok out of the 2 i just read this is my fav. cuz i can rly relate. i have so many un answered questions and this just rly brought all of them to my mind. 5/5 good job!

  • I did a poem like this a long long long time ago. So I know how you're feeling.. or felt. It was very sad, but nicely done. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by June

    Very good and I think in all honesty alot of people would admit to asking themselves many of those questions at some point in their lifes.I know I have often asked myself many of them.

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Excellent peo u have here, i can relate 2 it a lot 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I can related to this .
    Like it . There`s just somethin` botu it .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    We all think that way at some points in our life. Great questions, though I'm not the type to like repetitive things.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh dear.
    Too much repition for me by far.
    I just.. I can't stand it.

    I'm not going to be mean and downrate you, but I would have given this a three. =/ Really sorry. It's by far not your best.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex No Rate

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Everyone has questions.
    and of those, they seem to be the most frequently asked.

    it beautiful.

    5/5