Comments : Drops of Relief

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Teardrops aren't the answer
    They won't cure this pain
    Won't fix the frustration
    Or my sanity regain

    And despite my courage
    My admitting that I'm strong
    These drops of relief keep falling
    And it fixes what's been wrong

    Teardrops may not solve the problem, but they sure help heal the pain.

    Wonderfully written. Nice flow and heartfelt message.

    Peace and Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "Teardrops aren't the answer
    They won't cure this pain"

    Thats a cute way of putting up, i always find teardrops a cute word, lol.
    It was a lovely poem, veery emotive
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Well, i think this peom could have been a little better if it had a little more strength in it. Although, i do think the last stanza is the strongest stanza there.

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for commenting on my poems. I did think about putting 'Just like you' in the humour section.