by Amanda Oct 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The smile which you see upon my face |
by Kristina
Umm im sorry but all you did was repeat the same thing over and over again. it was good but you shouldnt do that so many times. trying adding some other stuff to the poem. it would be better. |
This is a really good poem, i really like it..like a lot=] |