Red Rose

by Mommy And Me   Oct 3, 2006


Red red rose
a beauty not to be missed
living under the shadow of a giant oak tree

oh red red rose
starving for attention
watches as the leaves fall to their doom

yes red red rose
searching for the sunshine
only to starve in the dieing leaves

poor red red rose
petals fade one.. by one
and who is there to see

red red rose
a beauty not to be missed
died under the shadow of a giant oak tree

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Lovely poem. emotional and very flowing, it has a nice rhythm as well. thank you for submitting it into my contest!!
    although sad i really enjoyed reading it. and as far as i can tel lit has no flaws./ =]

    x.x:Lauren(5/5)

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Simply beautiful, lovely penned with beautiful emotions, so natural yet well rhytm....

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Jenna loves it, as she does all of your work! And nice to see you bac on the sight dearest paper. I missed you lol. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Nicely written, has a good rhytm :)
    easy to visualize what you wrote :)
    well done
    keep it up :)
    (i just think that it's dying instead of dieing)

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